Dan Gould Posted December 22, 2022 Report Posted December 22, 2022 Why is "Black Excellence" capitalized? No offense but you should consider another pass wearing your editor cap. Since I won't be purchasing, that's my 2c. Quote
Rooster_Ties Posted December 22, 2022 Report Posted December 22, 2022 I’m not CJ, and I don’t know what’s ‘right’ — but right or wrong, I have a tendency to capitalize the ‘B’ in ‘Black’ in most cases when using it as shorthand for African American (just a habit I’ve had for 20-30 years) — and I’d do the same with Black British (a term I have less need to use). That said, if I’m already capitalizing ‘Black’, I think(?) I would naturally be tempted to capitalize the ‘E’ in ‘Excellence’ too — because “Black Excellence” looks better to me than “Black excellence”. Also, as it’s used here, doesn’t “Black Excellence” sort of feel like a collective noun almost? Not technically probably right, but that feels right to me. Anyway, I probably would have capitalized the whole term too — even if that’s not what style guides say to do (fwiw). THAT SAID, there are a few other proofreading things I noticed too (though god knows I don’t proofread my own stuff enough most of the time). Quote
CJ Shearn Posted December 22, 2022 Author Report Posted December 22, 2022 Just now, Rooster_Ties said: I’m not CJ, and I don’t know what’s ‘right’ — but right or wrong, I have a tendency to capitalize the ‘B’ in ‘Black’ in most cases when using it as shorthand for African American (just a habit I’ve had for 20-30 years) — and I’d do the same with Black British (a term I have less need to use). That said, if I’m already capitalizing ‘Black’, I think(?) I would naturally be tempted to capitalize the ‘E’ in ‘Excellence’ too — because “Black Excellence” looks better to me than “Black excellence”. Also, as it’s used here, doesn’t “Black Excellence” sort of feel like a collective noun almost? Not technically probably right, but that feels right to me. Anyway, I probably would have capitalized the whole term too — even if that’s not what style guides say to do (fwiw). THAT SAID, there are a few other proofreading things I noticed too (though god knows I don’t proofread my own stuff enough most of the time). I'll check out the other errors you may have mentioned Quote
JSngry Posted December 22, 2022 Report Posted December 22, 2022 Black is the color of my true love's caps. Quote
CJ Shearn Posted December 22, 2022 Author Report Posted December 22, 2022 5 hours ago, Dan Gould said: Why is "Black Excellence" capitalized? No offense but you should consider another pass wearing your editor cap. Since I won't be purchasing, that's my 2c. I sent you a PM. Quote
Dan Gould Posted December 22, 2022 Report Posted December 22, 2022 CJ has explained to me about Black excellence. Whether it is normally capitalized is another question, judging from Google. Quote
CJ Shearn Posted December 22, 2022 Author Report Posted December 22, 2022 4 minutes ago, Rooster_Ties said: I’m not CJ, and I don’t know what’s ‘right’ — but right or wrong, I have a tendency to capitalize the ‘B’ in ‘Black’ in most cases when using it as shorthand for African American (just a habit I’ve had for 20-30 years) — and I’d do the same with Black British (a term I have less need to use). That said, if I’m already capitalizing ‘Black’, I think(?) I would naturally be tempted to capitalize the ‘E’ in ‘Excellence’ too — because “Black Excellence” looks better to me than “Black excellence”. Also, as it’s used here, doesn’t “Black Excellence” sort of feel like a collective noun almost? Not technically probably right, but that feels right to me. Anyway, I probably would have capitalized the whole term too — even if that’s not what style guides say to do (fwiw). THAT SAID, there are a few other proofreading things I noticed too (though god knows I don’t proofread my own stuff enough most of the time). Not only that but Donald Byrd represented something that a lot of other jazz musicians didn't necessarily, he was more than a musician, a renaissance man who took the opportunities to expand himself using what was available to him. Cornel West, Dr. Claud Anderson and countless others I probably am not aware of are examples of this. And given that I am half Black myself it's only appropriate to capitalize. Maybe i hung around the Lenny White orbit a bit too long (I no longer do- still love the guy's music) but there was a definite pro Black bias, in his Zoom group... there are experiences he's had as a player and as a person I can't imagine Quote
danasgoodstuff Posted December 22, 2022 Report Posted December 22, 2022 Nice work, as always, your passion comes thru loud and clear. Still not my cuppa, but more palatable to me than DB's studio work with the Mizell Bros. I probably shouldn't, but I have to say that DB's attempts here and elsewhere to be something more than a very good post-bop trumpet player mostly make him something less. Not unlike Artie Shaw thinking he had something better to do than playing clarinet and bandleading, he didn't. That said, I love Byrd's two excursions into choral music - New Perspective and Trying to Get Home. Wonderfully quirky and totally his in a way the work with the Mizell Brothers just isn't for me, YMMV of course. Quote
clifford_thornton Posted December 22, 2022 Report Posted December 22, 2022 More curious about this record than I was. It's usually a treat to hear Byrd and Davis together -- they became quite close in Paris nearly a decade prior to Montreux. Keith Killgo is an excellent drummer -- recall him from Andrew White records, passed over various Mizell sessions he's on but I guess he was a regular in that context too. Capitalize the B for sure. Editors be damned. Quote
CJ Shearn Posted December 22, 2022 Author Report Posted December 22, 2022 3 hours ago, danasgoodstuff said: Nice work, as always, your passion comes thru loud and clear. Still not my cuppa, but more palatable to me than DB's studio work with the Mizell Bros. I probably shouldn't, but I have to say that DB's attempts here and elsewhere to be something more than a very good post-bop trumpet player mostly make him something less. Not unlike Artie Shaw thinking he had something better to do than playing clarinet and bandleading, he didn't. That said, I love Byrd's two excursions into choral music - New Perspective and Trying to Get Home. Wonderfully quirky and totally his in a way the work with the Mizell Brothers just isn't for me, YMMV of course. I think the Mizell Brothers work is what it is... this album is just a refreshing change of pace. I can't see myself getting too many of their sessions either but I sort of try to listen for what they are. This album is a fun listen. Quote
felser Posted December 23, 2022 Report Posted December 23, 2022 5 hours ago, clifford_thornton said: Keith Killgo is an excellent drummer -- recall him from Andrew White records, passed over various Mizell sessions he's on but I guess he was a regular in that context too. Kevin Toney, the excellent pianist who plays on this also played with White (and both were in The Blackbyrds). Quote
clifford_thornton Posted December 28, 2022 Report Posted December 28, 2022 Ah, yes he did indeed! Quote
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